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Like sheep to the slaughter by ~Violated:iconViolated:



The residences are lined up
Like Napoleonic soldiers
All the lawns have military haircuts
the fences are like shields in arm

I broke the windows,
To see inside your house
To see if you were any different than the rest

I broke the windows.
All I got was a beer stained couch
and a bible on the bed post

In these suburbs
I've seen the western dream through pipe smoked eyes
In this residence
I'm learning every soldier rots and dies
©2009 ~Violated
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I sometimes maybe sometimes secretly write in secret.

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Have you thought about sometimes maybe sometimes not-so-secretly sending your secret writing to a publisher and having them pay you? Because honestly, this particular piece is amazing. I have been trying to nitpick it and can't, and that's a first for me.
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Maybe one of these days I will, I certainly need to write more. Thanks for the critiques and compliments on everything it is all so greatly appreciated.

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